Wednesday, 27 January 2016

Trial ethnicity exam feedback

T;5

EX;10

EAA;10

25 - D

Terminology: some terminology but inaccurate (mine en scene and editing weak) - Level 2
EX: Some textual evidence but only a partial range of examples - Level 2
EAA: Basic understanding of how technical aspects construct representations - good comments but you tend to retell the story rather than focus on the techniques and terminology - Level 2

Having read my essay i think i need to stop writing about the character and write about the race more.  - Answer the question!!
Also i need to use the correct terminology in the correct place with the correct analysis and explanation .

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